This sentence does not quite make sense
... the size of a cfcheckpt message is not drastically from a cfheaders
between two checkpoints. ...
Change it to be
... the size of a cfcheckpt message is not drastically different from a
cfheaders message between two checkpoints. ...
This sentence grammatically incorrect
Empirical analysis also shows that was chosen as these parameters ...
Elect to fix the sentence to be:
Empirical analysis also shows that these parameters ...
This sentence should use a singular 'key' instead of 'keys'. Change
'knowing an extended public keys allows' to be 'knowing an extended
public key allows'
When mentioning a bip we use a hyperlink to the bip file to assist
readers. There are two mentions of bips in BIP-0009 that do not use
links, probably because links where provided above in the text, however,
its a bit easier on the reader if we provide links again to save
scrolling through the document.
Use hyperlinks when mentioning BIP 34 and 141 in isolation.
Tobin Harding